"Thank you Philippa, for the help you gave me. Your advice with the written word is skillful and insightful but your most vital contribution was helping me to nurture and develop my true voice on the page. You introduced me to my wonderful agent Gill McLay. The journey has been magical and I have signed a fantastic first book deal, with publication agreed for 2021."
Ros Roberts, April 2020
"As any aspiring author will know, what you learn at some point is you’re never going to get a book published without a professional editor. I had dabbled with two or three before I found Philippa. Within a few weeks of my speaking to her I had a fully edited novel, cut by 20,000 unnecessary words, lean and ready to go. Since then Philippa has found me a professional agent who is at this moment pitching to various publishers. I have no hesitation in recommending Philippa and SmartQuill."
Phil Platts, January 2020
"Philippa has helped me understand story telling and is coaching me to get my book as good as can be. As well as her professionalism and technical knowledge, I’ve really appreciated her empathy, warmth, and how she’s taken the trouble to understand my motivation for writing and the deeper emotional story that motivated me to write."
Peter Straker, January 2020
"Writing a novel can be a solitary and painful experience, the latter amplified tenfold when it comes to getting an agent. That Philippa has faith in my ability is priceless. She is what all first-timers need; a rigorous editor and relentless advocate."
Stephen Ferns, January 2020
"Dear Philippa. Thank you so much for your hard work editing and scouting. With your help I've now signed with a literary agent. Your insightful feedback and positive approach has been a pleasure to work with."
Rob Clouston, April 2019
"The most exciting moment of my writing career to date came when my debut novel, Blood on the Stone, was accepted for publication by Unbound Books. I would never have been able to enjoy it without Philippa Donovan. The acuity of her reading, the wisdom of her advice and the creativity of her suggested edits were all the more effective for her tactful and constructive approach in proffering them. Once I had implemented her recommendations, I began sending off the manuscript with greater confidence, and even rejections from publishers and agents started to come with compliments for my work. I cannot commend her services too highly."
Jake Lynch - author, Blood on the Stone (Unbound Books, 2018)
"I would recommend any unpublished writer to use smartquill. A fantastic service which helped me to improve my work, find an agent, and set me on my way!"
Harry Heape - author of Shiny Pippin and the Broken Forest, published by Faber 2018
"It is with great pleasure that I can recommend Philippa as an editor. I engaged the services of Philippa to offer editorial advice on my novel, “When The Stone Shepherds Awaken”. The subsequent report I received of my draft was frank, direct and candid and offered suggestions on areas where improvements could be made. There was sobering advice that was delivered with professionalism and compassion. My initial reaction was to resist the change but when I worked through her analysis I could see the merit in what she had provided. My re-draft is still in the process of being completed but I can feel the difference in engagement with the characters and the flow in the work is much improved. If you are searching for an editor for your work, I can recommend Philippa. Mark Barkley" Classic report, September 2016
"I have started work on your edits. They are AMAZING. I am going slowly but already I feel the start is stronger. A lot of what I originally wrote got culled so the issues you are flagging up are bang on the money. Roxane"
Premium report, December 2015
"The many benefits of having Philippa as an insightful and eagle-eyed editor are highlighted in the testimonials on this website, and I fully agree with those. But I discovered that once you gain a place in her agent recommendation service, it gets even better. And paradoxically, I found out that getting rejected can be a good thing! Since agents are inundated by submissions, aspiring writers rarely get detailed reactions. So they keep sending out submissions without knowing why the rejection slips keep piling up. Submitting via the recommendation service however, got me incisive and helpful comments from the agents in question. Adding these voices to that of Philippa’s, I was able to reshape my crime novel and make it far more marketable. So all in all, Smart Quill Editorial is more than a very professional editorial service: it is a fully-fledged author services platform, run by a dedicated professional!" Mike Bos, November 2015
"I just want to thank you for the in-depth and constructive report. It certainly took the lid off my every concern I had regarding the manuscript. There’s so much positive feedback here where you have drawn attention to factors I never contemplated. The prospects for successfully correcting the manuscript are so clear to me now. Every fact you identified in your premium report proved accurate. Once again, I’d like to thank you for the valuable advice and guidance.Yours sincerely, Ronald George Jelf"
Premium report, September 2015
"As a complete novice I knew I needed an editor. Not having one was never an option but where to start, what to look for? I had no real idea what to expect from an editor, naively I probably thought I would receive little more than a copy edit with a few pointers on plot. Philippa’s report kind of blew me away. Her attention to detail is impressive. Her clarity and understanding help to draw the focus where it needs to be, character consistency and story credibility. I honestly felt I had a much tighter, better story as a result of her scrutiny and as such I couldn’t be happier. I would recommend her without exception and hopefully will continue to have a valued working relationship for many future projects. But be warned she gets booked up real quick! Dee Palmer"
Classic report, April 2015
"Dear Philippa, Thanks so much for the report — it is very clear and insightful and, best of all, very very useful. It is now apparent to me that there is no substitute for an experienced editor's notes — prior to this I have been relying on a couple of long-suffering friends which has been fine but only up to a point… Thanks so much again. Best wishes, Caroline."
Precis report, April 2015
"Dear Philippa, Just wanted to send you a quick thank you for your report. I'm amazed at the depth you've been able to go into in such a short space of time. There's a lot of really useful stuff there - I have no doubt it will greatly improve the book. I'm currently on a school holiday-enforced break from writing, though, so it'll be a few weeks until Veronique and I have the time to sit down and go through it all properly together. I'll be back in touch then if I have any queries, if that's ok? In the meantime, thanks again, and have a great Easter. Best, Ed."
Pointer report via David Higham Associates, April 2015
"Philippa, Thank you for your wonderfully insightful and constructive report. It has really shone a light on many aspects of the novel that I was unhappy with and which I was clearly unable to recognise the reasons why, close up, myself. You have also highlighted other elements that I’d not even considered - with the net result that I can’t wait to get stuck into reshaping parts of the story - I’ve got plenty of ideas coming to mind already. Thanks again. All the best. Alan."
Classic report, March 2015
"Hi Philippa, I just wanted to let you know how I have got on with The Pirate's Code since you sent me your report in Spring of 2014. My original idea was for this to be an interactive e-book and I have engaged some developers with this in mind. I am delighted to report that the project is now complete and the e-book app is now available on both the Apple App Store and Google Play App Store. It is under the name 'The Pirate's Code' on the Apple Store and Google Play. I also have a micro website which is almost complete at www.thepiratescode.co.uk/. Thank you for your advice and wisdom. Kind regards, John."
"Hi Philippa, Whoever it was that said that 'all writing is re-writing' knew a thing or two. Phew! I've been through your report several times now and I'm more impressed with every reading. Thanks again,Jock."
Premium report, January 2015
"I was recommended to use Philippa by a literary agent who's the friend of a friend. I was so glad that I did. I chose a Premium Report as I wanted to give my children's book the best overhaul possible. The service was first class, the report was delivered on time and was all that I hoped it would be. Philippa really 'got' my book and was super helpful in trying to get it placed with an agent. I would use Smart Quill again, without hesitation. It gave my writing and my confidence a great boost."
Premium report, December 2014
"The insight, scrutiny and experience Smart Quill applied to an edit of my pre-submission MS, delivered with professionalism and warmth, played a vital role in securing me my first publishing deal."
Piers Torday, winner of the Guardian Children's Fiction Prize 2014
"Getting the support of Philippa and Smart Quill Editorial was the best thing I could do to improve my book. The feedback I received was more than I had hoped for and very insightful. It touched in a very clear way on things I had never considered before and as a first time fiction author, really helped me improve the story-delivery and character building. Friends who read the draft versions of my novel The Traders - Trading Owls with Athens before and after Philippa's input, commented on the noticeable improvement, which is the best independent testament to Philippa's professionalism and skill. When I write my next book, I'll go to Smart Quill again!"
Premium report, September 2014
"Hi Philippa, Just to let you know, Scholastic, the first publisher to see Archie Bloom after my edit based on your feedback, snapped me up for a three book deal and will be heavily promoting at Frankfurt. Scholastic, Ben Illis and I should be announcing in the next few days. Thank you so much for your help, it was just what I needed to clinch a deal! Best, Gabrielle."
Pointer report, July 2014
"Dear Philippa, Many thanks for the feedback which was more than I had hoped for (which is not to say I had any doubts it was going to be useful). Very insightful and hitting on things I had never considered before. Lets see how I get on, but many thanks. Really appreciated. Peter."
Premium report, May 2014
"Thank you so much, Philippa. Thorough and fascinating. I will consider all the observations you have made and use your expertise to improve my submission. I will be back in touch at the first opportunity. Best wishes, Steve."
Agent Submission report, April 2014
Dear Philippa, When I woke this morning and saw your email, I sat at my desk in a state of nervous excitement as I read your assessment for the first time. Indeed, I was so absorbed in your critique that I don’t remember breathing at all. By the end, I sat back and felt such relief that I couldn’t do anything for a while. It was my first attempt at a novel and I hadn’t realised how much it meant to me. After the second reading my hands were shaking with excitement, (which had nothing to do with the double espresso). The possibilities for improving the manuscript are so clear to me now. Every note you struck in your comprehensive report rang true. It was as if I was seeing the manuscript again with new eyes. Thank you so much. Your advice and guidance will be invaluable. Kind regards, Mark."
Premium report, January 2014
"Dear Philippa, Thank you very much for the rigorous scrutiny of my manuscript. Your report is incisive, constructive, and tremendously eye-opening. I will obviously need more time to mull over your sound comments and suggestions, but I can already see several exciting possibilities for improvement. With best wishes, Felicia."
Premium report, November 2013
"Hi Philippa, I took your advice on my novel, changed a few things as per your suggestions and entered a competition. I have just received the good news that my novel has been long listed. I will find out if I have made the short list soon. I just wanted to thank you for the service you provided, well worth the cost. Regards, Shellie Kelly."
Precis report, October 2013
"Whatever qualities my book possesses were without question augmented by your report. It takes a fair bit of courage for an author to risk this kind of assessment, and so the objectivity of your extensive comments gave much-needed encouragement where it was merited, and equally much-needed criticism when that was appropriate. And in the present climate, the additional outlay of the Agent Submission was, quite simply, invaluable. If my book should eventually find a home with a publisher, that will be in no small measure thanks to your painstaking reading and acuity. Thank you so much."
Pointer report and Agent Submission report, July 2013
"Thank you very much for this report. It is very detailed and extremely helpful. Your report has strengthened all the issues that I had suspected were holding the story back and now having a professional opinion on those issues has given me leave to go ahead and change them with confidence."
Pointer report, August 2013
"Thank you for a very thorough and professional job. This is exactly the kind of analysis that I had in mind, and exactly what I needed to hear."
Premium report, July 2013
"Many thanks for the report, I’ve been musing over it and letting your ideas gestate a little. I really like all your comments and in some ways the report comes as a relief as I knew something wasn’t right with the beginning to the book. So to have the clarification on that is just great."
Precis report, July 2013
"Philippa Donovan reads accurately, and translates that close reading into technical analysis which not only identifies aspects of a narrative that are failing its readers, but what to do about it. Good editors are rare; Philippa Donovan is a good editor."
Sam North, author of The Old Country (Simon & Schuster, 2007) www.samnorth.co.uk
"I think its just what I need right now to take this further. I can see how much time and thought you've given this - far beyond what I anticipated, so thank you for doing that."
Niel Bushnell, author of Sorrowline (Andersen Press, 2013)
"It was such a relief to find an editor so in tune with what I was trying to write, and in many instances suggesting how it could be written better! I’ll certainly be asking your advice again."
Kjartan Poskitt, author of the Agatha Parrot series (Egmont, 2011 – 2013) www.kjartan.co.uk
"Thank you so very much for your exhaustive appraisal of the ms. I appreciate the suggestions and advice on where and how to move the book onto the next draft. As this is the first professional feedback that I have received, it is both enabling and refreshing as I can clearly understand what needs to be addressed."
Premium Report, June 2011
"Many thanks for your very thorough and thought-provoking picture book report. Your expertise has been extremely useful in providing insight into how editors think and moving my story along to a much, much better place!"
Brief Picture Book Report, February 2012
"Your feedback is that lovely combination between constructive criticism and encouragement with thoughtful and considered analysis. It also gave me confidence in my own hunches, as much of what you said, I had suspected was the case, but didn't want to confront it."
Pointer Report, July 2012
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